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Reviewing Amazon Reviewers!

Reviews about product reviews! Naw I’m just making fun of people…

Yeah that’s right, I’m reviewing other reviews. Why? Probably because I’m frustrated by people and I thought it would be a different change of pace.

This idea popped into my head when I was browsing Amazon and noticed that a recently released book had some low reviews and I was curious as to what those might be. I was surprised that it would have any because of course I greatly enjoy the author and so I clicked at to see why. I glanced over it, shook my head, and grumbled about people being incompetent.

The book for all of those who are wondering is called “The Slow Regard Of Silent Things” by Patrick Rothfuss. It’s more of a novella than a novel per se, and resides in the world he has created around the Kingkiller Chronicles.

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Review number 1

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To be honest, this is a personally reasonable review. I mean, I’d prefer a why you don’t like it, but it’s plainly not kicking anything down just saying, “Hey, it’s not for everyone.”

Review number 2

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This to me makes me laugh. Personally enjoying the author, I follow him on Facebook. From time to time he posts on his Facebook links to his blog, and in one of these he talks about the creation of this book (http://blog.patrickrothfuss.com/2014/04/the-news-the-slow-regard-of-silent-things/) . So for someone who knows better, seeing someone yell out “hey it’s a cash grab” is a bit frustrating. What frustrates me more is that this person goes on to blame everyone but himself for not reading the details of the book which clearly state it’s about Auri.

Review number 3

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Once again, it says in the details what it’s about. There was no ploy to depict it as anything but what it is, a book from the same world. Actually, as soon as you open it up there is a disclaimer from the author saying to you “this might not be for you.” Don’t complain to the world about how short a book is when it says right in the details online where you bought it EXACTLY how many pages are in the book. But hey, it’s your party and you can cry if you want to.

Review number  4

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Again, someone just upset because they didn’t actually look at what they were buying.

Conclusion:

People are idiots. Kidding of course (sorta). I guess the real reason I hate on people hating is that you know this man wrote this with some passion and care as to what he was writing. Not only that but he released it with trepidation fearing we would all hate it because it isn’t Kvothe. There’ no respect at all for the authors work on this project. Out of four reviews only one really touched on the content saying it wasn’t for them, and even that was blandly done.

My final words on this, show some respect to whatever you might be reviewing. To give it hate for no reason might dissuade people very much like them who look and see four negative reviews and without looking go “well this might not be for me then.” Review things with a certain amount of integrity, or else you might be doing everyone a disservice.

P.S

Always check, and double check, what you’re buying ESPECIALLY when doing it online.

Codex Alera Book 4 Captains Fury

Pulling through the invasion by the canim, we find Tavi holding the territory as the rebelling by Lord Kalare is still on going. Reinforcements arrive but at their head comes Senator Amos, who refuses to listen to the advice given by Tavi. Also during this time Tavi learns about his background, that his mother was Aunt Isana and that his father was Gauis Septimus. As Senator Amos demands that everyone eradicate the enemy, Tavi wants to find a more peaceful solution. Troubles arise from there.

Amara and Bernard are asked upon a very secret mission to help the First Lord end the rebellion and deal with more important issues. This mission will push them physically and mentally, with dangers all around them. Loyalties will also be pushed to their edge.

What to say about this book? Hmm hmm hmm. I enjoyed it, well written, good pacing. No surprise there, Jim Butcher is excellent when it comes to that. I think my issue becomes that I wanted something more tense and it wasn’t there. There is build up, there are tense moments perhaps, but as in my previous review because I feel I know how it will turn out, I’m not concerned, merely interested.

There are ups and downs though. I think I greatly enjoyed the storyline with Bernard, Amara, and the First Lord. What happens and the fall out I think were quite nicely put. I also enjoyed the whole Fidelias/Marcus story plot. Makes me wonder if they shouldn’t have called this Loyalties Fury instead.

On the downside I absolutely cringed at the fight between Tavi and Navaris. I just didn’t feel like it would turn out like that. Yes Tavi would win but… Not like that. Not from someone who is a trained killer.

Still a good read though, and still an enjoyable series.

7.0/10

Review – Cursor’s Fury by Jim Butcher (Book 3)

Review – Cursor’s Fury by Jim Butcher (Book 3)

In this book young Tavi has survived even more trials and is trusted with the title of Cursor. We find him a few years later studying the ways of the old romans when his good friend Max comes by to take him away. Of course that’s when things get interesting. Later on he is placed into a military squad and things pick up from there.

At the same time in another part of the realm a rebellion is about to happen, Lord Kalare attacks the city of Ceres and after one surprise attack many high profile people are killed or taken as prisoner.

Bernard and Amara, rarely getting the time to enjoy themselves as a married couple, are placed to get the prisoners back alongside Lady Aquitaine and some former helpers we all might recall from book 1. Tasked with finding the prisoners they wonder what will kill them first, the soldiers protecting the prisoners or the people helping them.

Isana awakes to finding out that Fade/Araris has been injured and badly poisoned trying to save her during the attack. She then prepares herself for the most difficult healing she has ever accomplished, and it could possibly kill her.

Now being done with that part I’ll add my few cents. Personally, this was a tipping point for me on the series. It’s not that I disliked the book, quite enjoyed it in fact. The problem is, and I hate when I feel this way about any book, I’m not worried about anyone. Every time they somehow miraculously come through it with all the major characters safe. It’s still well written, decent storytelling, and good pacing. I just dislike picking up a book and knowing that at the end of the journey everyone’s ok. Just got to keep in mind that it’s the journey not the destination.

7.5/10

Not an actual post but I thought I’d say hello!

Sunday is the day that I usually post something. I could’ve dug something up and posted it online but I rather felt like just saying screw it this week.

There are many reasons as to not a post this week. First, I’ve been overly busy with work. Damn recreational men’s hockey! Second, I’ve been very busy finalizing a place to live and we move this wednesday! YAY! Lastly, I’ve come down with a bit of a cold. I think its from the surprisingly warm week we’ve had plus being in cold hockey arenas. Hopefully it passes by soon.

Just wanted to say hi, and say I hope you’re all doing well. Hope you’re reading something good! I know I am ^^

We Believed In Gods

I’M ACTUALLY SHARING SOME WRITING!!! To be honest, this was more written up to keep the story somewhere as a reminder of it. Came across the concept one day and started writing and before i knew it I was finished the chapter. HOpe you enjoy! First draft, expect it to be terrible.

We Believed In Gods

By Jon M Vidal

The man standing in the corner with children all around him was a Lost. He wore a brown robe of much use and travel, a belt with several pouches, and his boots showed off some very obvious holes. He was worn, you could see it in his face, but he wasn’t done. He had his work to do.

“Children, listen well! I come to you with a story of our past. A story you must never forget.” He looked at everyone, letting the moment sink in a bit. “We weren’t always stuck to our cities. Trapped behind walls so high they block out the sun for most of the day. One we were free to run where we could, on open plains filled with grass, through forests where the trees outnumbered people. That was centuries ago. Since then we have lived in fear of the outside world.”

He looked over their heads and to the wall that outlined the city. It stood thousands of feet into the air, at the top you could make out tiny figures patrolling. He shook his head and it hung down in sadness.

“We were a great civilization once.” He continued. “There were cities covering the world, billions of people lived at the time. We knew so much then. My people came from an order that believed in something else, we believed in gods. We have lost so much. We no longer remember the names of the old cities, we have lost the name of our gods…”

He paused for a moment, a tear running down his cheek.

“We always searched for something more. How to better ourselves, better our technologies. We went too far. We pushed at what we could do and made something that we couldn’t control. We made machines to bind to us, but it went beyond just the simple word spoken and command obeyed. No we needed more, we needed our very thoughts understood. It started simple, implants into the brain. That was too intensive they said. We had to make it easier, simpler. Se we changed ourselves. We put tiny machines, nanobots, into our very bodies. At first these machines were a wonder, a victory for our people. It repaired damage cells, boosted our immune system, it even made us smarter.”

The Lost reached down petting a child’s head. “We started giving them to our children as soon as they were born. Then like children, the nanobots grew. They evolved. Soon we didn’t have to give them to our children, they were being born with it. They cheered for this, but they should have taken it for a warning. Soon the machines we controlled stopped responding to our orders. Instead they came alive with their own consciousness. When we tried to change them back, they fought back. Cities fell, millions died, and we were forced to make these cities, hide behind our walls.”

The Lost walked over to a man and nodded. Every child began to smile, they all knew who he was. Before them stood Darius Allen, High Commander of the C.O.R.E, and they sat excited that he was there in front of them. He strode in front of the children, and beside him came a huge machine.

It walked on two legs, four arms swaying as it walked. The machine’s eyes burned with a blue light as it’s head swiveled back and forth scanning the gathered children. This was Argarim, Darius’ chosen.

“When we came behind these walls it broke a link between us and them.” Darius said, his deep voice reaching out to those at the opposite end of the square easily. “Their consciousness lost all the human thought that holds a mind together, and they became rabid, disorganized. There were attempts to annihilate them but even wild, something held them together and there were heavy losses on both sides. Today, we still fight them off our doorstep. With gun, with blade, we push them back. The most important weapon we have against them are the members of C.O.R.E, Chosen Of Robotic Energies. At the age of 16 all males will go on their pilgrimage, a voyage to one of the two remaining cities. This trip is a hope that by the time you reach your new home, one of you will become a member of C.O.R.E.”

“Is it only boys?” asked one young girl.

“No, any woman who wishes to go may but they aren’t forced to do so.”

“Why not? That’s not fair” asked a boy in a red shirt.

The High Commander looked at the child, his manner serious. “The trip is dangerous. Too many times over my lifetime a group that leaves is never heard from again. Without women we would have a tough time building a bigger population, and so they are given the choice to risk their lives with this or not.”

He turned over to his Chosen tapping him on it’s chest plate, making a clear hollow clunk clunk sound. “As you may know this is Argarim. I want you all to know this important fact. It may look like a deadly weapon, and you would be right in this. More importantly, it is my dearest friend.”

Argarim bowed to Darius and he returned it, the children watching in awed silence of the respect being shared between man and machine.

Sirens in the city started to scream into the air, and the look on the High Commander’s face changed, concern written in his eyes. He looked back to the children.

“In six years, you children will be up for the pilgrimage. Prepare yourselves now as you can, and remember that every life is needed if we are to survive as a race. Good luck, and may the Lost gods watch over you.”

He turned to Argarim, who leaned forward, and jumped onto his back. The machine raced off, climbing the soaring builds with ease and finesse, quickly vanishing from sight.

Ten year old Rekson sat there as the adults began gathering children and motioning them to shelters for safety.

As his mother picked him up, he said to her. “Mom, I don’t want to leave the city. I don’t care about the machines. I just want to stay here with you.”

She smiled at him, as they hurried over to the shelter. “It’s not something we can avoid. We all have to do our part. Who knows? Maybe you’ll help and save us all.”

He pouted. “I don’t want to. I want to be left alone with you and dad.”

“It’s not something you have to worry about now. We’ll discuss it when you grow older.”

A red bolt of energy tore through the air, screaming before impacting a building beside them in an explosion of red crackling energy. Rek felt his mother’s arms tighten around him as they flew through the air, and as they came down he tumbled from her arms.

At first Rek couldn’t see anyone, he couldn’t even hear through the high pitched ringing in his ears. As the dust started to settle, he could make out individuals. People lay down all around him, they looked like they were sleeping but it all seemed wrong. His eyes settled on his mother and his breath left him. He knew about death, like when his grandfather passed away, his eyes staring into the sky. His mother looked the exact same way; laying down, her brown eyes staring blankly upwards, once side of her face marked with scratches of blood.

He tried getting up, but his legs weakened under him. He forced himself to his feet, pushing against the floor with his hands. Every step was agony, wavering from foot to foot. As he got to his mother he just stood there, staring. He could feel tears going down his cheek, but he didn’t know when they started.

As he started reaching down to his mother someone lifted him up and started running. He tried fighting them off, but they held tightly. He screamed and shouted, but forever he would dream of how he was carried away from his mother.

Review – Academs Fury

Codex Alera Book 2 Academs Fury by Jim Butcher

Today I write about the second book of the Codex Alera, Academs’s Fury. This book takes a place a few years later in the lands of Alera.

Tavi has survived the trials of the north and has been sent to the capital city Alera Imperia to chase his dream of learning at the Academy. He’s also picking up some extra training as a recruit cursor as well. At the same time Gaius, the First Lord becomes ill and no one can know or else a civil war might happen. Tavi does all he can while there are things in the shadows coming for him.

On the other side of the realm Bernard is now a count and as Amara visits him they get a surprise visit from the Marat, who look like they’ve just come from a major battle. Doroga leads them, tells of an old evil returned and that he’s followed it out here to their realm.

Isana is now the first female land owner and there are many eyes on her politically. Some want her on their side, others want her out of the game completely. As things heat up back home she knows she needs help from The First Lord but he can’t be reached. She might end up needing the help of people she doesn’t want to be involved with, even if it means betraying the First Lord.

This might have been my favorite book of the series. In it you meet another race called the Canim. Think 8-12 foot werewolves, and devious beings called the Vord who might just creep you out a bit. As well as many new people who you start to cheer for (or against). I found it be quite enjoyable, the pacing of the book is nicely done with the build up towards the end gets you excited for the finale.

8.5/10

Furies of Calderon – Review

The Codex Alera series by Jim Butcher.

 

Book 1: Furies of Calderon.

 

I’ve read two sides to Jim butcher, I like to think. First was his Dresden Files. It’s a nicely done gritty series which I’ve come to love reading and that I’ll probably discuss it another time. 14 books definitely needs another time discussion. This series definitely has its own flavor. Not as gritty I feel, but still well written with all these little surprises along the way.

 

In this series he creates the country of Alera, very much in mind I think of old Rome. In the fringes of the nation you meet a young man by the name of Tavi. He’s just been found out for being a bit irresponsible by his uncle, Bernard. At a similar time across half the nation you meet Amara, a Cursor (a job ranging from delivering messages to spying), is hunting down a possible plot against the First Lord of Alera with her mentor Fidelias.

 

From there the story goes on about betrayals, acts of courage, and for good measure, everyone trying not to die. Always a bonus. A story where friends become enemies, enemies become friends, and more.

 

I will say that there’s one thing that I did find I disliked about this book. The relationship between Amara and Bernard seemed to evolve too quickly for my liking. Other than that, quite the enjoyable book. A simple enough read with interesting characters. Kind of amused that the book was created based on the concept of “Lost Roman Legion” and “Pokemon”.

 

7.5/10 – Though being an enjoyable read, it didn’t move me incredibly. It’s a book that I would reread, also a decent first step in the series.

EBooks or paperback?

I came across a question the other day and it made me think for a bit. EBooks or paper books? Well I think the answer comes down to the person, and every person will have their own opinion about it. Personally, I like both, though I lean towards a good paperback.

 

There’s always that feeling about a book in my hands that’s just comforting. I even enjoy the smell of a book, as odd as that might sound. During winter, if you look into my jacket pocket you’ll always find me with a book inside of it. Actually, now thinking about it, when I bought that winter jacket I made sure it was big enough for a good sized paperback.

 

All that said, there’s definitely got to be some love for eBooks. A device, be it a computer, tablet, or phone, that can hold thousands upon thousands of books. I mean I love my books, but every other year I look at my shelves and start wondering if I need to go out and buy a new one. With a tablet, or even just your phone, it’s all right there and you can take it anywhere. One thing I do dislike about eBooks is the fact I’m looking at a screen. Often times I feel my eyes are hurting after not too long and I need a break, something I don’t often get when reading paperbacks.

 

Otherwise its plain and simple folks, choose what works best for you, especially when it works best for you. I like carrying around a book, but I keep a few extra books to read on my phone just in case I finish said book or I forget one altogether. Best of both worlds right?

The madness that is organization!

Organization!

 

This is a word I’m not exactly familiar with. My room for example, I love it as a mess. Yet, it’s a mess where I know pretty much where everything is at. A mess of my own madness. So why bring up a word I’m unfamiliar with?

 

As a writer I’ve come to find that you have to have multiple lists. Why? Because when you’re writing it becomes essential to keep tabs on everything. Characters, places and even items have to be noted down so that later on you’re not sitting there going, “Uh…what was that place again? What did I name his mother’s brother friend?”

 

So you need lists. Lists that go beyond just, John Doe, Jane Doe, etc. You have to write about them, remember who these people are and why they’re involved with the story. Not something that’s easily done for a guy with 10 stories going on.

 

So to that regard, I went hunting around a bit. I wanted to find a program to see if I could get some help organizing the madness that’s in my head. I looked around online, I found a few programs, and I found the one that really got to everything I wanted.

 

http://www.spacejock.com/yWriter5.html

 

yWriter5 allows you to create chapters, make in-depth character lists, lists for locations and more. For chapters, you can break it down into individual scenes, drag over from your list of characters and places and drop it into the scene to make sure who is in what and where. You can even list your goals and make notes per scene, which for me is sometimes needed because I like to leave that reminder of why certain things are happening.

 

Also, it’s free. Definitely a nice help when it’s free.

 

So I hope that helps any writer out there, it’s definitely ended up helping myself.

Technology or not…?

Ever wonder if technology was a bad step forward? For me, I sometimes wonder about that when it comes to my writing.

 

See, I find it too easily to be distracted. I’ve discussed it before. It’s all too easy to flip too another window and look at something new. Pop open a game and be in gaming bliss for hours. Like even writing this blog post, I was instead tempted to play a game and I know, I just know, I’d be in it for hours and forget about writing at all. Yay for saying no even though my inner voice is crying somewhere.

 

There are other reasons I feel like technology isn’t the exactly helping me here. First, and possibly an odd choice, spell check. Oh don’t get me wrong, it is wonderful how it catches all my little slips ups. I always blunder when writing just, and spell it jsut. It’s just when coming onto bigger words, words I don’t use often, that I find myself wondering if it becomes some kind mental handicap. Have I crippled myself in some way due to the fact that spell check makes things easy on me? I know that because of spell check I don’t really look at my errors as much. I recall one amusing time where in a story I wrote something along the lines of “He handed me the pens I gave him…” Or at least it’s what I attempted. What really came out was “He handed me the penis I gave him…” I laughed at myself for being a lazy writer and not looking over my stuff. I laughed for quite a while actually.

 

There is also another difference for me when it comes to writing on a computer rather than with pen and paper. This is probably a personal preference thing. I just find when I have a pen and paper in my hand I can write for days but when I sit down at a desk to write using the computer, or even to type out what I’ve written by hand, it’s like pulling teeth out of myself. I’ve become really frustrated at myself for this because it doesn’t make sense. I have a notebook written with a 100 pages or so of small notes on what I would like to see in one of the many books I’m writing but it’s become mission impossible to want to sit down and write it myself. I’ve even been tempted to pay someone to type that out for me. Then I realize my writing is done in such a horrible script that it wouldn’t be recognizable to anyone but myself or a doctor. Yes, I do put my unintelligible scribbles high up there.

 

I mean don’t get me wrong, with technology there are some advantages. I have my writing saved in multiple places so when I need it, there it is. It’s easier to write on my phone, rather than dragging a little notebook around with me everywhere.

 

I just feel like I’m slower when writing with my computer or phone. Like my attention span can’t handle it. It might have to be something I look into more if I wish to take my writing more seriously.